Task 2 Thesis Check: Remote Work & City Centres — too broad?

Emily Johnson

Canada • Band 6.5

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Does this thesis clearly satisfy Band 7 Task Response for 'Discuss both views and give your opinion'? 'While remote work invigorates small regional towns, unadapted downtown districts face fiscal decline; nevertheless, converting vacant offices into housing makes flexible work a net gain.' Feedback welcome!

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Marcus Vance• 18 hours ago

Very crisp thesis! It signals both views and establishes your conditional stance clearly—solid Band 7.5 trajectory.